Her Story- (the other side of "His Story")

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JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-03-12 06:58 PM

I'm sure all he hears
Is my giggles
I let out to show I'm here
But inside I'm not laughing
But holding back my tears
My faithful prince does not know
Why I ran away
On horseback that fatefull night
When the lilacs bloomed in May
I run through the forests now
To let him know I haven't fled so far
But never let him catch me
For my love for him is just too strong
This all may sound so odd and unjust
But the tale I tell is true
My darling prince
Can't have me
Nor can I have him
The disease is devouring my insides
I cannot let him know I'm to die
So I left
Before I couldn't bear
To leave his strong and handsome side
As time grows near I wonder
If he thinks of me still each day
As I do of him
My heart longing
As I slip further and further away
My white slip dress and furled scarf
Have since been torn apart
By many a thorn, a branch, and twig
As I run
Helter skelter
Insane
Without my love
How much longer till I'm white and pale
And can no longer keep my stride
I wonder...
Will my prince come finally
To rescue me, his princess
That had gone away...
But I'm so afraid he'll only find
Me lying
on beaded leaves
In the wood's great pride
Out of breath, out of life
Becoming his dead bride.

demonic~angel
Member

since 2000-03-11

Posts 54
Kansas

1 posted 2000-03-12 07:26 PM

Thats very deep and emotional...It brought tears to my windowless eyes...Great work...

Carpe Diem...

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-03-12 11:33 PM

joy, youve outdone your self with this sequel, it is as perfect as the first one!!
km

Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

3 posted 2000-03-13 02:00 PM

Thanks! I kind of like this myself!

Joy

Gather ye rosebuds while ye may,
Old time is still a-flying,
And this same flower that smiles today
To-morrow will be dying.

-Robert Herrick

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 2000-03-13 05:45 PM

Oh Joy sad but wonderful. You should try a saga or two like I have in the past. A tale of two lovers, part 1,2 and 3. Up for the challenge?

May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

5 posted 2000-03-13 07:09 PM

Isis, you bet I am! I was thinking about a 3rd one because I'd hate to end it without knowing what happens to the prince and princess lovers. I want to know the most out of anyone who reads them though! (ha, ha) Better get started. Cheers to enchantment!

Joy

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2000-03-13 09:36 PM

JOY~ is he going to kill himself when he finds her dead, or will there be a happy ending?!? I hope you write another!-SEA

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

7 posted 2000-03-14 02:10 PM

I just finished Part 3! I'll be posting it very soon so look for it.

Thanks

Joy

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