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~*Forbidden Pleasures*~
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~*Forbidden Pleasures*~ |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas 
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Forbidden Pleasures I've always wanted to be free To abandon all the rules and live wildly I've always wanted to live life to it's fullest To do all thats forbidden and dangerous I've always wanted to break these chains To live all of the pleasures and all of the pains I've always wanted to express my individuality To live life without boundaries ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
me too..c'mon lets go...  seriously..this is a well expressed piece... thought provoking as well, why are the things we wish for so unattainable... nice work, take care, jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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virgil baichoo New Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 8 |
Excellent work my friend. a very well written piece. keep them coming. peace virgil |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Me three!! Come on Janet Marie, every woman, let's leave these restraints and go conquer a man or two!!!!!!! Great job  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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gypsyqlt Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 147Bradford,Vt USA |
Starr... Well...GO, BABY ! Live wild n' free ! I'm with you 100 % ! Nice piece, btw. Jocelyn |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
woooohooooo !!! lets go !!!!! Thanks for all your replies guyz ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Starr~ this is great. I think we all wish for some time like that. -SEA |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
Take me with you, I wanna do that too!!!! VEry good poem, I liked this one. I wanna feel free, and let it all hang out, and run around naked and stuff!!!! JUST KIDDING :P Much love, One love, PEACE |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
LOL --------------------------------------------- Come one, come all ... Come with me We'll all go be wild and free Let the good times roll and laughter fly As our troubles quietly pass us by We'll dance on clouds, catch some stars Break every chain and tear down the bars ! And when alas we have to return to reality We can cling to the dreams of our fantasy ! --------------------------------------------- Thanks you guyz I'm glad that you all liked it it is one of my favorites ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
and here comes the devil's advocate!  tried this lifestyle already. it's not as great as you might think if you do not approach it wisely. sure, it was great fun for a while, but it came back to haunt me. things forbidden are not always pleasureable. o.k., now that i put a damper on the party, (sorry), i'll be going. btw- i have nothing against having a good time. i just learned the hard way to do it sensibly. i love too much, and not enough. |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
awwww Danni you did not put a damper on it in fact maybe your the voice of reason here we all want to get away , live without boundaries but or actions would still have consequences and repercussions and far better to be warned in advance somethings are better left a dream I suppose ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Probably nothing harder, requiring more courage than to break from the bonds of conformity in our society. Get an education, get a job, get things, get,get,get, and we all follow along because it's what we're supposed to do. Then one day only to wake up and find that life has passed by. Now I know why they call old age a regret. Jeez, I'm rambling. I'm packin my bag, getin on my Harley, and I'm outta here. Oops, before I leave, wanted to tell you I enjoyed your poem. Now, where's my sleeping bag? [This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 03-15-2000).] |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
Dancing on clouds...interesting concept...loved the poems! ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ I'll be here...why? I'll be waiting...for what? 'll be waiting for you so...if you come here, you'll find me... I promise. |
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