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atslanta Junior Member
since 2000-03-10
Posts 13 |
Between the folds of my sheets at night there lies a breaking heart the end of a day of companion thoughts; a bitter friend from the start a twist, a turn, a fluttering eye, a cheek with trail of tear this empty well of stain and damp; a pain towards which I stare A love professed, an untruth confessed, warmth reacheth within the soul but her heart’s abide her past’s denied, and my love she bought and sold yet love conquers all, so truths befall under the frail of simple guise hold my heart on near my love, my dear, this tragic fantasize [This message has been edited by atslanta (edited 03-10-2000).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow - great poem, aslanta. "yet love conquers all, so truths befall under the frail of simple guise" Wondeful line - ouch - I need a band-aid after reading that one... Welcome to Dark Passions! I can't wait to see more of your work. Michael |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is a very emotional and well expressed poem...perfect for here in DP...welcome,its nice to have you here... take care, jm you're really alone at last... you're bored and fading fast, if it's true you'll fall from the past all you'll have to do is ask you'll feel but never be you want and always need price you pay for wanting to see will you have all you've ever dreamed... robin wilson |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
Love Does conquer all, and It definately does hurt. Great poem, Much love, One love, PEACE |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome indeed to our forum family. This had bite, I like that!! Well done  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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