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StarrGazer
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since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas

0 posted 2000-03-09 01:51 PM


Since You Left Me

Baby, since you left me I feel empty inside
And there's a pain in my heart that I can't hide
I dreamt of holding you tight
Snuggling with you at night
Your first smile, your first step, your first word
Your laughter, a voice that will never be heard
I thought of running my fingers through your hair
Showing you each day how much I care
I wanted to spoil you with kisses, hugs, lots of love
But God decided he wanted you with him above
Now my life is filled with could've beens and broken dreams
BecauseI forgot life has surprises, it's never what it seems
And baby since you left me, I feel empty inside
There's a pain in my heart that I can't hide



~Dedicated to my little angel, I'll never hold you in my arms,but I'll hold you in my heart forever- I love you!~






 ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~


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devinmaria
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 130
Middletown, Ohio
1 posted 2000-03-09 11:24 PM


wonderfully touching post.  i had a mental picture of my 15 month old daughter sleeping upstairs in my head the whole time i was reading it.  im sorry about your loss, i cannot imagine losing my angel.  but you are right to leave it in gods hands and trust his judgement.

aimee


 Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica

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2 posted 2000-03-11 12:03 PM


StarrGazer~ I can't even begin to tell you how my heart aches for you. I'm so sorry for your loss.-SEA
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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3 posted 2000-03-11 02:27 AM


somethings are just beyond reason and we  find our healing in believing...this poem is a beautiful loving tribute, I too am so sorry.
take care, janet marie

StarrGazer
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since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
4 posted 2000-03-11 02:40 AM


devinmaria, SEA, Janet, thanks for your replies   It happened almost 4 years ago, so I've been able to move on I suppose, like they say time works miracles and makes you appreciate the miracles you have already    

 ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~



ill_tactics
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 149

5 posted 2000-03-11 08:17 PM


*hug*  Heres a hug, in situations like this, one must be strong.  Hold your head up high, and maybe what you feel inside, will rise above to the heavens up high....  Much love, One love PEACE
gypsyqlt
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 147
Bradford,Vt USA
6 posted 2000-03-12 06:52 AM


Starr,
I am praying for you.  Know that your little angel will be with you, always.  God bless you.
Jocelyn

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