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Breaking Through |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Somehow I am aware of my consciousness And can feel the heavy weight of darkness All around me there is nothing But I know I am something Time is not measured nor conceived Life is something not to be believed There is no speech in this world Imagining where in darkness I’m being hurled Lost I’m not, but found again The blackness, the absolute nothingness I give in Alone, yet I feel other ones This will be proven if The journey is ever done Because of these moments of stillness And quiet I feel a sense of otherworldly warmth And comfort Though sound is not quite a concept I can hear my thoughts, and yet, Still not comprehending what it all means This world is not a part of my dreams Sensory deprived, in fetal position Moving in purest bliss Towards that bright opening Then, in a sigh both hopeful And forlorn, I break from the darkness and wake; And am born |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
Sensory deprived, in fetal position Moving in purest bliss Towards that bright opening Then, in a sigh both hopeful And forlorn, I break from the darkness and wake; And am born great imagery once again. the ending was great. really loved this one. aimee Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Thanks aimee. Glad it was ok. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
damn, talk about the poet putting himself in a place and then taking us there...the imagery of emotion in this is awesome...once again the word DEEP comes to mind... "Time is not measured nor conceived Life is something not to be believed There is no speech in this world Imagining where in darkness I’m being hurled Lost I’m not, but found again The blackness, the absolute nothingness I give in" loved this one...stalking on.jm you're really alone at last... you're bored and fading fast, if it's true you'll fall from the past all you'll have to do is ask you'll feel but never be you want and always need price you pay for wanting to see will you have all you've ever dreamed... robin wilson |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
i dont know how you do it, but you did it again. I liked this one too, hope you have more in thoughts in your pen. Much love, One love PEACE |
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