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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA 
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Sitting here all alone Wanting to be close Knowing how far you are I simply wanna be close To something that I can't have When I get scared I am alone Knowone to care Knowone to save Someone help me I need out Give me a hand Don't leave me alone But as I am alone My little world Comes un-done A slowly fall apart Into shattered pieces Standing here alone Wanting to share my pain But I stay alone For the better of the world -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Your poems are always so sad, how can you being alone, be for the good of the world? I'm beginning to think you are to critical of yourself hon.... Still the poem was well done as always  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Neala, This is a nice piece, even though sad. I think you have a good writing skill. Look forward to more of your work. |
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Rosalind Palafox
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MemberPosts 88 |
I like your poem. Where do u usually post your poems? Let me know. I like to read sad poetry. "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Neala, I may not speak for the world but Dark Passions is certainly a better place with you in it. I hope you will continue to share your work with us. Michael |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
Thanks everyone I am glad you liked the poem I normally post in here. -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
tears, I hate the feelings of lonliness, but I live life alone, with not even my shadow to follow. Nice poem. Much love, One love, PEACE |
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