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AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE

0 posted 2000-03-09 02:19 PM


           Like objects of desire

You didn’t read me...all those times I thought you did
Still gathering the memories...that your mind discards
Tired of picking the ruins of a relationship...
Like an object of desire...fancied and attained
Now abandoned...like the object once desired

All those times I thought you saw…you merely looked through
You painted the picture...while I pay the price
Complacent you remain...chaotic my world
Like an object of desire...just a meaningless need
Waived once attained...like objects of desire

The melodrama tires you...but the lies keep coming
The precious times passed...the bitter tears I taste
Just the thought...just someone that I knew...
Like objects you desire...just delirious and delusional
An object of desire...you made me to be




 you don't have to understand completely..to love completely...
remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao



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Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
1 posted 2000-03-09 02:28 PM


I really enjoyed this metaphor. Especially "waivered once attained." Some great word choices.
Jannel


 "I'm just saying
that we've mistaken one
for thousands of words,
and for that mistake
I've caused you such pain
that I damn that word."
-10000 Maniacs "Jezebel"



Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
2 posted 2000-03-09 03:25 PM


"An object of desire", how very well said. I enjoyed this much Avanti  
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-03-09 06:28 PM


The melodrama tires you...but the lies keep coming
The precious times passed...the bitter tears I taste
"Just the thought...just someone that I knew...
Like objects you desire...just delirious and delusional
An object of desire...you made me to be"


this is excellent AVANTI!!!!!
and how i am smiling to see you posting a poem again!!!!!! I missed you and your(...)
(smile).
I related to this one's emotions all too well.
we seem to be on the same wave length...
take care, jm



 you're really alone at last...
you're bored and fading fast,
if it's true you'll fall from the past
all you'll have to do is ask
you'll feel but never be
you want and always need
price you pay for wanting to see
will you have all you've ever dreamed...
robin wilson


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