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| Dark Poetry #1 |
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Like objects of desire |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
Like objects of desire You didn’t read me...all those times I thought you did Still gathering the memories...that your mind discards Tired of picking the ruins of a relationship... Like an object of desire...fancied and attained Now abandoned...like the object once desired All those times I thought you saw…you merely looked through You painted the picture...while I pay the price Complacent you remain...chaotic my world Like an object of desire...just a meaningless need Waived once attained...like objects of desire The melodrama tires you...but the lies keep coming The precious times passed...the bitter tears I taste Just the thought...just someone that I knew... Like objects you desire...just delirious and delusional An object of desire...you made me to be you don't have to understand completely..to love completely... remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
I really enjoyed this metaphor. Especially "waivered once attained." Some great word choices. Jannel "I'm just saying that we've mistaken one for thousands of words, and for that mistake I've caused you such pain that I damn that word." -10000 Maniacs "Jezebel" |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
"An object of desire", how very well said. I enjoyed this much Avanti  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The melodrama tires you...but the lies keep coming The precious times passed...the bitter tears I taste "Just the thought...just someone that I knew... Like objects you desire...just delirious and delusional An object of desire...you made me to be" this is excellent AVANTI!!!!! and how i am smiling to see you posting a poem again!!!!!! I missed you and your(...) (smile). I related to this one's emotions all too well. we seem to be on the same wave length...  take care, jm you're really alone at last... you're bored and fading fast, if it's true you'll fall from the past all you'll have to do is ask you'll feel but never be you want and always need price you pay for wanting to see will you have all you've ever dreamed... robin wilson |
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