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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
fire goddess lying here with book in hand, a blanket warms my feet. the fire dances and calls my name, alone and incomplete. flames jump and whisper to me, as a goddess comes alive. a glow about her passioned face, as she stares into my eyes. stepping from the embered coals, she slides along my side. and beckons me to come to her, and lay my book aside. drink within my pleasures sweet, she softly speaks to me. feel the warmth i have to share, come and sip my luxury. make sweet love by the light i give, be drunkened by my wine. the flames of passion rising high, as our souls become entwined. the fire fades about the room, my goddess slips beneath the coals. i grasp the blanket and smell of her, staring blindly at my soul. mo |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
great piece. i really liked this one. your style of writing is great and i think it is somewhat similar to mine. i really really really liked this one. aimee Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
is anybody else in here HOT!!! LOL  perfect mo..great imagery and heat!! jm you're really alone at last... you're bored and fading fast, if it's true you'll fall from the past all you'll have to do is ask you'll feel but never be you want and always need price you pay for wanting to see will you have all you've ever dreamed... robin wilson |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
dm, thank you very much for the comments, and jm i don't think you are the only one that is hot. mo |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
wow i loved this !! ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mo~ This is so sexy!( On a Sat. morning, watching cartoons with my kids,jeez!  )Very nice. Enjoyed it!-SEA |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
thanks starr gazer, i hope she came out and grabbed you as she did me, and dear sea, what can i say, sorry to interrupt the cartoons, but grab while you can. thanks for such sweet comments, mo. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Mo anything with goddesses in it I love, I loved this. Did you post it in another forum previously it seems familiar to me??? Great piece  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
thank you isis for the comment, no this has not been posted in any other forum, i only wrote this the other day, i am glad you liked it. thanks mo |
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