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Condensed - Another "Ditty"
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Condensed - Another "Ditty" |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration 
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imprisoned tight raybeam's stage veiled light craven cage ~a prison of the soul~ sunbeamed sight pagan paige phantom blight guilt assuage ~innocence to extol~ feral fright maddened mage undead rite somber sage ~perusing tomes of death~ empassioned height gorgon's wage manic might wartime rage ~spectre's reeking breath~ [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 03-08-2000).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
One hell of a "ditty' there, bud. This one completely rocks! loved it. Michael |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
The trouble you went through to post it as you did, helped with the read. Crafty, and powerful, along with spooky! Loved the scheme too. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Much power in these few words. I am still a bit awed and have few words. Simple words with deep meaning. Wonderful Chris.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
visually and verbally PERFECT!! great work!! enjoyed this much! jm ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. janet marie |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
My goodness..you are one of the few poets that can present a poem in an unusual way! I love this...though it is rather dark...  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is a "ditty"? ohmyohmyohmy.... just breathless, here, Christopher... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Christopher you are amazing! WOW, this really does ROCK!!! |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Incredible! (And you say just a little ditty!!) |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Chris, your presentation is never anything less than masterful. So strong and a little shadow tinted, I love it! Abrahm Simons Put one foot on the path of life and tread the dagger's path betwixt dark and light. |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
Enjoyed the visual as well as the semantic. This had a great pattern and very well chosen words. Jannel "I'm just saying that we've mistaken one for thousands of words, and for that mistake I've caused you such pain that I damn that word." -10000 Maniacs "Jezebel" |
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