Dark Poetry #1 |
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one dream, one mind |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
one dream, one mind serenity follows the emptiness, the music fades away. a calmness overtakes my soul, your image forever stays. i see us walking on the beach, strolling hand in hand. underneath a silver moon, barefoot in the sand. i'll open to you my inner self, and show you what's inside. it is my sanctity from the world, it's where i come and hide. i close my eyes and dream of you, not a day that passes by. for you are with me always, as a teardrop fills my eye. one dream, one mind, is all i'll ever have. it's you i want to share it with, true happiness we can find. mo. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
serenity follows the emptiness, the music fades away. a calmness overtakes my soul, your image forever stays. mo, this is SO beautiful with emotions, it has a calming, peacefullness about it. very nice.JM ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. janet marie |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
my friend, you truly have a way with words. such gentleness. i liked this one very much. i love too much, and not enough. |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
janet marie, again i thank you from the bottom of my heart, and danni my sister of words what can i say. mo |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
you are very simple yet very good with words and i love your style. i very much look forward to reading more of your work. great poem. aimee Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
This was a very beautiful poem. Only if I could find true hapiness, with my one dream, and my one mind. Only time will tell. Great job! Much love, One love PEACE |
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