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mojar
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

0 posted 2000-03-07 01:33 PM



one dream, one mind

serenity follows the emptiness,
the music fades away.
a calmness overtakes my soul,
your image forever stays.

i see us walking on the beach,
strolling hand in hand.
underneath a silver moon,
barefoot in the sand.

i'll open to you my inner self,
and show you what's inside.
it is my sanctity from the world,
it's where i come and hide.

i close my eyes and dream of you,
not a day that passes by.
for you are with me always,
as a teardrop fills my eye.

one dream, one mind,
is all i'll ever have.
it's you i want to share it with,
true happiness we can find.

mo.

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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-07 06:36 PM


serenity follows the emptiness,
the music fades away.
a calmness overtakes my soul,
your image forever stays.

mo, this is SO beautiful with emotions, it has a calming, peacefullness about it.
very nice.JM

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
janet marie


danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
2 posted 2000-03-08 01:10 AM


my friend, you truly have a way with words. such gentleness. i liked this one very much.

 i love too much, and not enough.

mojar
Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa
3 posted 2000-03-08 11:02 AM


janet marie, again i thank you from the bottom of my heart, and danni my sister of words what can i say.   mo
devinmaria
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130
Middletown, Ohio
4 posted 2000-03-08 12:26 PM


you are very simple yet very good with words and i love your style.  i very much look forward to reading more of your work.  great poem.

aimee

 Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica

ill_tactics
Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149

5 posted 2000-03-09 05:53 PM


This was a very beautiful poem.  Only if I could find true hapiness, with my one dream, and my one mind.  Only time will tell.  Great job!  Much love, One love PEACE
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