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Andreja Nikki
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 18


0 posted 2000-03-07 03:11 PM



I am thinking about the words I'd say to you if you were near,
I guess there are a million words,
But if I had the chance to utter only three....

I Love You.

I have never stoped loving you,
The littlest things remind me of you,
And how I want you back so badly.

A yearning that will never be satified,
I watch you from a distance,
Hoping that you find happiness.

But remeber my dear friend,
I will always Love you.


© Copyright 2000 Andreja Nikki - All Rights Reserved
Artur Hawkwing
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since 1999-06-30
Posts 444
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1 posted 2000-03-08 01:04 PM


Very sweet poem. The words expressed here suit the topic perfectly. Those three words, I think, are the hardest ones in the world for most people to say....... if you can say them, give yourself a pat on the shoulder!
ill_tactics
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 149

2 posted 2000-03-09 06:11 PM


This poem brings up emotions that are exactly what you wrote.  I would like to have his love, and be with him, but loves not fair.  Hope you have more, but dont make me cry     Much love, One love, PEACE
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