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Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

0 posted 2000-03-06 01:01 PM



Memories,
pain,
will it ever fade ?
Will tomorrow
be a better day ?
Today
Death I feel
Is this
my destiny ?
This ache ?
This guilt ?
of sins
not made by me ?
Am I to blame ?
Is there still hope ?
How much longer
can I cope ?
Sadness, such pain !
Madness, rage !
Love ?
No more !
No more
for me !


Munda

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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
1 posted 2000-03-06 02:10 PM


I have felt the questioning...the guilt...the rage.  I have wanted to scream "no more!" many times.  I relate all to well to the frustration so vivid in this piece.     Very well done, Munda.


Michael


Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-03-06 04:49 PM


love having you in DP MUNDA!!!
i relate to this one...well expressed...as always...

"Is this
my destiny ?
This ache ?
This guilt ?
of sins
not made by me ?"

love this verse...
jm

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
janet marie


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