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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 2000-03-03 10:58 AM



Accross the world
Accross the  seas
The Ice king walked
To find loves tree

He sang to the mountains
And sang to birds and bees
Of the lonely life
That his travels had been

Through the dark lands
Under the seas
Traveled the Ice king
To set his heart free

He stood in awe
Of skies of gold
As he walked in fields
Sprayed with cold

As he travelled
On the air it comes
A voice of beauty
With words his own

He had seen much
And travelled the winds
Spoke to Eagles
And Fought demons and kings

Yet never had his heart
Felt the lightness of this
So he set away toward the sound
Of the angel for a kiss

As he approached
A tower loomed
Built of rocks
Instilled with gloom

At its height
The angel sang
In dress of white
And wings of satin

Undetered the king did climb
Up the tower to the sky
Passing clouds and birds
singing him on as they fly

Up and Up the king ascends
Past the last cloud
And into the heavens
To the angels sang aloud

Their she sat on a throne
His heart was lost now
And love filled him whole
The ice kings heart melted now

Their love was pure
Their love was strong
Their Rule was true
Their Rule was long


 Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd


© Copyright 2000 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
devinmaria
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130
Middletown, Ohio
1 posted 2000-03-03 11:34 AM


is this the end of the ice king?  great ending if so.  happily ever after huh.  great work.

aimee  


 Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica

Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787

2 posted 2000-03-03 11:37 AM


To all who care the end is here untill perhaps he bears and heir but who knows
Stranger things have happened

  Did you write the Book of Love
And do you have faith in God above
If the Bible tells you so
Do you believe in rock 'n roll
Can music save your mortal soul
And can you teach me how to dance real slow


Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-03-03 06:47 PM


Walter...thank you, you spoil me...
I smiled when I saw the title...this was a perfect and beautiful ending to ths creative tale. And a happy ending at that!! Not your perfered style, I know...(smile)
thank you for indulging my imagination!!
and thanks for the lovely reply verse today as well.take care, janet marie

 When you see through love's illusions, there lies the danger...
And your perfect lover just looks like a perfect fool
So you go running off in search of a perfect stranger
While the loneliness seems to spring from your life
Like a fountain from a pool.

Jackson Browne


Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
4 posted 2000-03-05 05:46 PM


Hmmm I found and lost   I really enjoyed this tale ! All parts ! Thnak you for writing it, thank you for sharing it and hopefully you'l' come up with a new story soon !
star83
Junior Member
since 2000-02-27
Posts 26
SD
5 posted 2000-03-05 07:54 PM


Very well done. I liked the ending.
PoeticKnight
Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA
6 posted 2000-03-06 05:12 PM


A happy ending in dark passions? *S*...who says its not possible? It fits perfectly. Loved this saga, like an epic of old.
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