Dark Poetry #1 |
Ballad of the Ice King Pt6 Ice Angel |
Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Accross the world Accross the seas The Ice king walked To find loves tree He sang to the mountains And sang to birds and bees Of the lonely life That his travels had been Through the dark lands Under the seas Traveled the Ice king To set his heart free He stood in awe Of skies of gold As he walked in fields Sprayed with cold As he travelled On the air it comes A voice of beauty With words his own He had seen much And travelled the winds Spoke to Eagles And Fought demons and kings Yet never had his heart Felt the lightness of this So he set away toward the sound Of the angel for a kiss As he approached A tower loomed Built of rocks Instilled with gloom At its height The angel sang In dress of white And wings of satin Undetered the king did climb Up the tower to the sky Passing clouds and birds singing him on as they fly Up and Up the king ascends Past the last cloud And into the heavens To the angels sang aloud Their she sat on a throne His heart was lost now And love filled him whole The ice kings heart melted now Their love was pure Their love was strong Their Rule was true Their Rule was long Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
is this the end of the ice king? great ending if so. happily ever after huh. great work. aimee Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
To all who care the end is here untill perhaps he bears and heir but who knows Stranger things have happened Did you write the Book of Love And do you have faith in God above If the Bible tells you so Do you believe in rock 'n roll Can music save your mortal soul And can you teach me how to dance real slow |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Walter...thank you, you spoil me... I smiled when I saw the title...this was a perfect and beautiful ending to ths creative tale. And a happy ending at that!! Not your perfered style, I know...(smile) thank you for indulging my imagination!! and thanks for the lovely reply verse today as well.take care, janet marie When you see through love's illusions, there lies the danger... And your perfect lover just looks like a perfect fool So you go running off in search of a perfect stranger While the loneliness seems to spring from your life Like a fountain from a pool. Jackson Browne |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Hmmm I found and lost I really enjoyed this tale ! All parts ! Thnak you for writing it, thank you for sharing it and hopefully you'l' come up with a new story soon ! |
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star83 Junior Member
since 2000-02-27
Posts 26SD |
Very well done. I liked the ending. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
A happy ending in dark passions? *S*...who says its not possible? It fits perfectly. Loved this saga, like an epic of old. |
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