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Dark Poetry #1

Missing You

star83
Junior Member

since 2000-02-27

Posts 26
SD

0 posted 2000-03-05 07:49 PM

Missing You

I try not to speak aloud
Of those tangled thoughts
Upon my brow;
But how can one be silent,
When the person I adore
Is in my mind ever more?
Happiness has become an
    obstacle to attain;
For saddness is the one that remains.
The token I ask of you,
    cannot be proved,
Upon the day,
You speak only truth;
Not to dissmay.
That's why I'll love you still--
You're in my heart,
And nearer than before;
No more tears of loss,
Or sorry cannot 'ford,
Missing you now,
A kiss if I knew how.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-05 10:19 PM

this is very good.. good smooth rhyme flow...I like the last lines emotions...perfect ending

...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
janet marie

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