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Sadness all over again
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Sadness all over again |
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Candy Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 17 |
You think everything is beter But you are fooling yourself Inside you know its going to end You fall for it all over again You get too into him When you are with him everything is ok you could never guess what hes going to do to you the next day. He says he loves you, But you dont know its not that way. He doesn't like you at all He told you himself. Just friends Is all that comes out of his mouth. The one you got so close to is gone. It was just a big game, And i lost it all. Candy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"You fall for it all over again You get too into him" this is great...i related to this one all too well... emotions well expressed. ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. janet marie |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
whew! been there, done that. i could relate to this all too well. nice work. |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Everybody loses when a game is played, but the question is, doesn't everybody play games in some way? Liked the poem, Candy, reminds me of when I was young and carefree...(Still not old, but not carefree). Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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