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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
A spirit hides inside this mind; Imprisoned. Barriers hold secrets Hell hath fury Skeletons dance. Pandora's box- leaks. Baring Internal mourning. Dark, deep secrets; Held tightly. Restrained by mere sanity. Kdw, Copyright 1999 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Dark, deep secrets; Held tightly. Restrained by mere sanity. this is perfect...cryptic and poetic...very nice.glad to have you here. take care, janet marie ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. janet marie |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Sanity can really suck at times...seems to be the door to that "internal mourning" you speak of. Great poem Kim. Welcome to the Dark Forum. Hope to see more from you here soon. michael |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Aren't we always standing on a ledge and barely hanging on to that grip of sanity?! Thank you both for your replies and the welcome to the Forum. Kim |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
nice work. especially "pandora's box leaks." i'm especialy interested because my first or second post to this forum had the same title.  i really liked this poem.jannel "I'm just saying that we've mistaken one for thousands of words, and for that mistake I've caused you such pain that I damn that word." -10000 Maniacs "Jezebel" |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Hi Jannel, Thank you I, Imagine there are many who have used the same Title or subject for a poem or two. But, admittedly I am now curious about the one you have written and would like very much to read it. Two minds that think along the same title can't be bad! I wonder if I can find the poem or if you would not mind emailing it to me so that I can have the oppurtunity to read yours too?! Kim |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Ya know, my sanity seems to be leaking these days...I think it has something to do with Pandora, but I cannot be sure. Perhaps, I will find the answer in your words, oh wise Kim. Seriously, I did like the poem, it really spoke to me and that is why I jest. Keep em coming and maybe I will learn some more. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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