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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-03-01 03:02 PM


In retrospect I often journey
Slipping into that frame of mind
When everything is gone for awhile
Except for the endless skies above
And below, my thoughts spill forth;
Random wanderings of timeless echoes
Find solace in the hope of tomorrow
Yet when the winds of apathy
Whisper words of long gone days,
The grip on my throat becomes
Like icy fingers of maliciousness
And there's some childish laughter
Off in the distance somewhere
I close my eyes in quiet desperation
With different shades of mind,
Lost in my silent embracing dream
Waking from darkest dawn
With other innocent dreamers
We arise with bright grey eyes
Knowing full well the darkness lost:
Acquiescence, the final cost



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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-01 03:18 PM


And there's some childish laughter
Off in the distance somewhere
I close my eyes in quiet desperation
With different shades of mind,
Lost in my silent embracing dream
Waking from darkest dawn
With other innocent dreamers
We arise with bright grey eyes
Knowing full well the darkness lost:
Acquiescence, the final cost"

I really like this one too, its got a "calming" quietness about it...dont you get tired, always having so many deep thoughts like this in your mind...(smile)thank god your a poet and have a release for it all
stalk ya later. JM



 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be...
Jackson Browne
*I miss you baby...
I love you...always.


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