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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-03-01 03:01 PM


A new day arrives
And all I see
Are the barriers
In front of me
I wrap myself in
Sunshine and happiness
With equal parts,
Despair and darkness
I’ve walked this far
To turn back now
Giving myself only
What I can allow
Standing on a cliff
Under brooding skies
The retrospective haze
Burns my eyes
Tears well up and
Fall softly down
My cheek,
Unto the ground
And there at my feet
Rises a mist
Parting the reality
Of all this
And I wipe my face,
Shivering cold
Not much longer
Here can I hold
Time becomes tangible
As if in a dream
Doomed to drown
In an echoing scream
Part of me looks
To the sea
The other, to the sky
Where I longed to be
But everything’s changed
Changed forever somehow
Life as I knew it,
It’s all over now


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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-01 03:10 PM


I wrap myself in
Sunshine and happiness
With equal parts,
Despair and darkness
I’ve walked this far
To turn back now
Giving myself only
What I can allow...

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And there at my feet
Rises a mist
Parting the reality
Of all this
And I wipe my face,
Shivering cold
Not much longer
Here can I hold"

wow, this one is beautiful, sadly but perfectly beautiful. you express your emotions with such...poetic grace. this is one of my favs. im getting another poem fix today...(smile)jm



 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be...
Jackson Browne
*I miss you baby...
I love you...always.


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