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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
How do you feel about me? What do you think? I really wish you would be harsh! Just to have you speak! Loning for your wisdom I wait for you in the pale blue sky Who are you and where have you put yourself? Tell me your soul and I will speak mine Do you care? Are you even there? Shall I give up? Of course! Why would you answer the pains of curosity my soul strives for! Stop thinking of who I am speaking to and start answering the questions of my blank mind Stop criticizing my pathetic none poetic words Stop feeling for the cries of torture next to the door of my deep depts of a soul My blind words running through your open fingers never to be held Let me teach you to see without your eyes Treat me as though I will be here...with you forever Stop your good-byes Then close your eyes Do not listen for the fimiliaur words Do not listen at all! The lesson...to learn to see, hear as I do... To feel my emotions that could kill the evil within the most evil of thoughts To touch your heart and yet not shape it into a creature of myself Can I inspire your heart? Only time will tell... "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WOW TA..this is excellent...so much emotion expressed here...very well written. did you give it to the one who inspired it??  take care, janet marie You're going to hear my voice in the morning calling your name And know my love and my desperation were one and the same... Baby it's alright... Take this pain and all this sadness It's alright Take this rain You're going to be free... Jackson Browne *I love you baby* |
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blueyz75 Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 138IL |
You're like me, always have questions with no answers. My go along the lines of, "do you still think of me" "have you forgotten" "do you want to see me again" blah blah blah! Kelly I love the male body, it's better designed than the male mind.---Andrea Newman |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I am listening. I like the message too. Michael |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
To feel my emotions that could kill the evil within the most evil of thoughts wonderful line. great piece. that line really caught my heart cause i know exactly, all too well what it means. to have a love in you so strong that you dont know what to do with it. been there. go girl! aimee Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Janet Marie- This is not just to ONE certain person...it goes to all my friends...I never know how they feel anymore. Thank-you all for your input! "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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Keli1019 Junior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 31FL |
I absolutely loved this poem. I think it's one of the best you've written so far. It was deep, but anyone who reads it can relate and understand. At least I know I can.  I know, myself, that right now in my life, I have a million questions that haven't been answered yet...I don't they ever will be.  But, I am listening..... "It takes a minute to have a crush on someone, an hour to like someone and a day to love someone- but it takes a lifetime to forget someone." |
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