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The Jackal
Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-02-29 01:39 PM


why are you following me
what do you want with me
i've caved in to obscurity
isnt that enough
to just let me be
crucified by the minute
love my cross
there is no limit
to all my humanity lost..

© Copyright 2000 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
Mystykyl
Junior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 32

1 posted 2000-02-29 03:00 PM


keep up da good work. u r a good poet. this is a great poem.

 

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-29 03:32 PM


very good, powerful message and emotions expressed in just a few lines. very well done.JM

 You're going to hear my voice in the morning calling your name
And know my love and my desperation were one and the same...
Baby it's alright...
Take this pain and all this sadness
It's alright
Take this rain
You're going to be free...
Jackson Browne
*I love you baby*



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