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Step 1 of my 12 Step Plan (Rated PG13 for language *wink*)
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Step 1 of my 12 Step Plan (Rated PG13 for language *wink*) |
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Maya the Brokenhearted Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 66 |
This is the first in a series of a 12 step program I just developed to cure myself of an unhealthy addiction I have been struggling with for years... Please forgive the swear words...they are "poem appropriate" but if not "forum appropriate" I will edit  (Just lemme know!)I didn't want to think of you today and dammit I did I wrote a beautiful poem and wondered if you knew the sun smiled down at me briefly today through the clouds and rain and it took but a moment for my mind to zoom 6000 miles and wonder what your day looked like damn you for everything for being in the air I breathe damn you for the trees the stupid green trees damn you for loving nature like I do damn you for the birds damn you for the wind damn you for EVERYTHING damn you for telling me how the crescent moon reminds you of us so now it reminds me of us too even the waves speak your name to my heart BUT I JUST WANT TO FORGET but dammit I can't and I need someone to tell me why I knew you were out there today and I knew you knew I was there too the silence between us as strong as a spoken word damn you for that for knowing I knew for being there for the connection DAMN YOU! [This message has been edited by Maya the Brokenhearted (edited 02-27-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I could almost see you standing there, saying 'damn you'...with tears in your eyes... so sad..and I understand... |
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Maya the Brokenhearted Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 66 |
I could just scream right now! LOL Maybe I should...... AARGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH! nope didn't help *sigh* ahh well on to poem #2 |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Damn him!! I hate that, you never look at the things you both loved the same for a quite a while. It is almost LIKE he did this to taunt you.. I know I too understand. Well written hon May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
"damn you for telling me how the crescent moon reminds you of us" i can't tell you how many beautiful things have been ruined for me by making them "ours" what a wonderful, heartfelt poem. jannel "I'm just saying that we've mistaken one for thousands of words, and for that mistake I've caused you such pain that I damn that word." -10000 Maniacs "Jezebel" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It appears that you are determined to make some progress to overcome this. Both the pain and your anger will help you get thru this. Keep going. James |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Damn, Damn, Damn... What can I say, you know I understand this one all too well. Emotions laces this one, Maya. You have my empathy. Michael |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
Damn him and damn him for making you damn everything else. I completely relate to this one. I loved this so much and I had to read it twice cause it was so powerful and spoke so powerfully to me. I actually sat with tears in my eyes. Very well expressed! You don't know me, but you don't like me. You say you could care less how I feel. But how many of you who sit and judge me have ever walked the streets in my shoes?-Korn ~Lil OnE~ |
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