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Dark Poetry #1

Simple and unimaginative.

star83
Junior Member

since 2000-02-27

Posts 26
SD

0 posted 2000-02-28 08:35 PM

Bring Again

My love,
Bring again the kisses of youth,
Or starry eyes that can only prove
The love so true;
The heart that pounds
For you, only you.
Heated blood and stinging sweat,
I place my hand upon my breast,
To calm my thoughts,
Such a lawful crest,
Bring again the day,
Where I shall lay
Inside the mind
Of yours eternaly.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-28 09:08 PM

My love,
Bring again the kisses of youth,
Or starry eyes that can only prove
The love so true;
The heart that pounds
For you, only you."

this is excellent star...so much emotion in a few lines...its a beautifully written poem...it deserves a better title(smile)

She says baby,
It's 3am I must be lonely,
When she says baby,
Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes,
Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it.
Matchbox20

I love you baby... always.*

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

2 posted 2000-02-29 12:56 PM

maybe short, but not simple by any means. another great work.

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