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| Dark Poetry #1 |
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Lonely Bedroom Haven |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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A lonely tear ran down her cheek, Like a mirror it shattered when it hit the floor, The sound almost deafening, In the silent world behind the closed door. This lonely bedroom her haven, She too scared to venture out, Out there, there is pain, Out there, people yell and shout. She is safe in here, Favourite momento's, Now her only friend, Favourite music making her heart beat staccato. Photo albums to travel through, Relive those happy times, Candle light a prescence, That doesn't hurt her eyes. She tried so hard, She never fit in, She prefers this fabled lonliness, Away from life's din. Her soul is mending, She WILL venture out soon enough, And bloom once again, Like a diamond from the rough. Don't feel sorry for her, Her self enforced sebatical, Is so much better than the substitute, Little white room all padded and sterile. May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
i liked this one very much! this had a lot of deep emotion and great flow to it. great job. amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Amy I enjoyed it too May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ISIS this is beautiful!! i love the first verses, they pull you right in to the poem... somedays I just wanna stay in bed and listen to tunes too..  She says baby, It's 3am I must be lonely, When she says baby, Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes, Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it. Matchbox20 I love you baby... always.* |
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Keli1019 Junior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 31FL |
I absolutely loved this poem!! I remember not long ago, when I too was afraid to venture out, but like you said in the poem, my soul mended, and I ventured out once again! I really enjoy reading your poems and can't wait to read the next one! "It takes a minute to have a crush on someone, an hour to like someone and a day to love someone- but it takes a lifetime to forget someone." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is lovely Isis... havens are very important. . . we all need a place to get away. .. for me, it's Passions. .. and thank you all for making it so enjoyable. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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star83 Junior Member
since 2000-02-27
Posts 26SD |
Great use of imagery in the first couple of lines. It started the poem out well. Also, thanks for the Welcome email you sent to me the other day. I greatly appreciate that! Keep on writin'.. |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
this one was very real to me isis. i spent three years hiding inside myself. it wasn't till someone came knockin at the door that i finally began to venture out. though i think i still have one foot inside the door. anyway, very nice work here. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice to know that you have that special place. I too have a few special places. One of them is music. I put on my headphones that are twenty five feet long and I walk around the house, sit on the back lanai, lay on the couch, dance, laugh, cry, or whatever suits my mood. The music is my inspiration. James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
James you got it wrong, the girl/woman isn't me, not at all. I'm into MUSIC, I sang in pubs before I was married. When I need to escape I walk somewhere pretty and quiet with my walkman on and SING and SING until I feel better, if I can't go out, I lock up the house and SING my heart out for hours. Like yourself music is my sanctuary and escape and the things that dreams are made of. Thanks everyone for responding so enthusiastically to this one, we have all felt like this girl at one time I belive, glad you all like it < !signature-->May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) [This message has been edited by Isis (edited 02-29-2000).] |
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blueyz75 Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 138IL |
Sometimes we make our own safe havens, not necessarily in our homes but in ourselves. We shut ourselves off from others emotionally and we don't get "involved" for fear of being hurt and as a result, we've locked our own prison doors. I'd like to know how all these new people who came to passions after me, have found time to rack up so many posts! I'm doing good to have a 120! I just don't have time. Just wondering.... Kelly I love the male body, it's better designed than the male mind.---Andrea Newman |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Well Kelly I don't know about others, myself, I spend maybe two hours in the morning on here, and an hour in the afternoon. But I do moderate so it's my job and such a great one at that!!! May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
isis *hugs* i liked this one. reminds me of me. i was always the one left out. always the strange one. the one who never fit in. no one knew the real me. they just seen the way i looked and judged me. i hated that. well i must say that you did a great job on writing this one. right now i am in so much pain that i cant even write a poem. now thats sad. well i got to go. great work Then it comes to be that the soothing light at the end of your tunnel is just a frieght train coming your way... MetallicA |
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