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~Venus~
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 128


0 posted 2000-03-01 09:05 PM


You came to me
when I needed hope.
You came to me
when I needed faith.
You came to me
when I needed a friend.
You came to me
when I needed Love.

In a way,
you are my
knight in shining armor.
The sun on my rainy day.
The rose in my garden of gloom.


I love you.



 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

I'll be here...why? I'll
be waiting...for what?
'll be waiting for you
so...if you come here,
you'll find me...

I promise.

© Copyright 2000 ~Venus~ - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-01 09:11 PM


oooh our goddess of love is in LOVE and poetic about it as well...lovely venus...very nice(smile)
jm

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be...
Jackson Browne
*I miss you baby...
I love you...always.


Keli1019
Junior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 31
FL
2 posted 2000-03-01 09:31 PM


Once again, another great poem by you!!  
This was really good, even though I'm not in love right now....

  ~Kelly~  

 "It takes a minute to have a crush on someone, an hour to like someone and a
day to love someone- but it takes a lifetime to forget someone."

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