Dark Poetry #1 |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Although this subject is a little too heavy for most people it is something that I NEED to write about. He came to me in darkness under the veil of night pretended to be what he was not when out of the others sight. I needed my father to comfort I needed him to teach but all the things I needed were well beyond my reach. He broke my trust and love stole what wasn't his to take. He destroyed all that I was for his own perverted sake. I want back the child I was to remember what I cannot I've only what he's left me - stench - the smell of rot. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sweetie...this is not the first time i have read one of your poems about this and it tugs at my heart deeply...I'm sorry you know this pain...many in here do(there have recently been several poems posted about this in Forum 6)...so know you are not alone and others understand...most importantly keep writing about it as it will help heal your heart and soul...never take the shame of some one elses sin...you dont have to carry that burden as well. continued healing and prayers to you. take care, janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Your pain is very well expressed here. You are not alone in this experience. It will take time and lots of little steps of healing to overcome your stolen childhood. Take care my friend. |
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lost Junior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 16New York, NY |
My heart aches for you - you expressed your pain and the violation so vividly |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
troubling. i am so sorry for what you have endured. thank you for sharing this bit of your life with us. i'm sure it wasn't easy - then or now. but this was a wonderfully sad expression of pain. jannel "I'm just saying that we've mistaken one for thousands of words, and for that mistake I've caused you such pain that I damn that word." -10000 Maniacs "Jezebel" |
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