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childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

0 posted 2000-02-26 08:14 PM


Although this subject is a little too heavy for most people it is something that I NEED to write about.

He came to me in darkness
under the veil of night
pretended to be what he was not
when out of the others sight.
I needed my father to comfort
I needed him to teach
but all the things I needed
were well beyond my reach.
He broke my trust and love
stole what wasn't his to take.
He destroyed all that I was
for his own perverted sake.
I want back the child I was
to remember what I cannot
I've only what he's left me -
stench - the smell of rot.

© Copyright 2000 Kim Soule - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-26 08:59 PM


sweetie...this is not the first time i have read one of your poems about this and it tugs at my heart deeply...I'm sorry you know this pain...many in here do(there have recently been several poems posted about this in Forum 6)...so know you are not alone and others understand...most importantly keep writing about it as it will help heal your heart and soul...never take the shame of some one elses sin...you dont have to carry that burden as well.
continued healing and prayers to you.
take care, janet marie

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*


Songbird
Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
2 posted 2000-02-26 09:32 PM


Your pain is very well expressed here. You are not alone in this experience. It will take time and lots of little steps of healing to overcome your stolen childhood. Take care my friend.
lost
Junior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 16
New York, NY
3 posted 2000-02-27 12:46 PM


My heart aches for you - you expressed your pain and the violation so vividly
Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
4 posted 2000-02-27 05:55 PM


troubling. i am so sorry for what you have endured. thank you for sharing this bit of your life with us. i'm sure it wasn't easy - then or now. but this was a wonderfully sad expression of pain.
jannel


 "I'm just saying
that we've mistaken one
for thousands of words,
and for that mistake
I've caused you such pain
that I damn that word."
-10000 Maniacs "Jezebel"



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