Dark Poetry #1 |
Dedicated to My Grandmother (1920-2000) |
starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Struggling to breath she gasps with all her might to an average person she's not a pretty sight The doctors told her that her time was drawing near she remained emotionless as if there was nothing to fear She accepted her fate- there was nothing more she could do The doctors heard her sigh as she let her last breath through Smoking has done all it can do to her now that she's resting peacefully her emphazima is finally cured. ***I LOVE YOU GRANDMA!!!*** Born July 23, 1920 Died February 16, 2000 "Falling in love is just that - falling. Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe. Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees. But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is a sweet and love filled tribute to your grandmother... I'm sorry for your loss...I understand how you feel... we lost ours to the very same illness 4 years ago... there is few things more precious than a grandmothers love or the memories we keep of them...take care, janet marie I love you Is all that you can't say- Years gone by and still... Words don't come easily Like I love you, I love you... But you can say baby... Baby can I hold you tonight Maybe if I told you the right words At the right time you'd be mine... Tracy Chapman |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
simple yet powerful. i know how you feel -- been there, with ya. i hope peace comes for you but grieving is a wondrous thing. i empathize and hope her spirit remains with you always. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Oh Ash hon, please accept my sympathies. So sorry to read of your Grandma's passing, at least, she is at peace now. (HUGS) my little sis, and if you need to talk you know where I am. May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Thanks guys....i know who my true friends are now...thanks isis...if i ever need to talk i know where i can find you....i love you....k....bye..... |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I am sorry for your loss. Grandmothers are special people. As to the reason to her death, smoking is so addictive, it is a hard habbit to beat especially when it has been a lifetime habbit. I posted a poem called Breathless I wrote about Tobacco because I have seen so many loved ones damaged so serverly from the effects of tobacco. I wish all could kick the habit before, their loved ones have to say Good bye, too soon. Writing is a good way to deal with grief, hope to see more of your writings. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Love you too hon *HUGS* May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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