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Sven
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0 posted 2000-02-25 07:03 AM


Today. . . the distance is hard. . .
It's like standing in front of an exploding window
And feeling every shard.

Today. . . I didn't wake up in your arms. . .
It's like being a little lost child
Wondering if he'll be kept safe from harm.

Today. . . I wondered if you were okay. . .
It's like a cloud that hangs over me
And takes the sunshine away.

Today. . . I haven't heard your song. . .
It's a slience, cold and dead
And for the music my heart longs.

Today. . . I love you even more. . .
It's like being born again
My heart going through that new door.

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Michael
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1 posted 2000-02-25 07:49 AM


Inspirational poem, for me anyway.  I seem to draw a kind of hope from your ending.
Beautiful work, Sven.


michael

Sven
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2 posted 2000-02-25 12:50 PM


Thank you Michael. . . today, hope is all that I have. . .

Glad that it could speak to you. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Janet Marie
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3 posted 2000-02-25 04:24 PM


Sven...how nice to have you here...
this poem is sadly beautiful...I was touched by its emotions...
"Today. . . I wondered if you were okay. . .
It's like a cloud that hangs over me
And takes the sunshine away."

sad and sweet...I relate to this one very well these days...
well, they say misery loves company...and were all here(smile)
take care, janet marie



 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*


JamesMichael
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4 posted 2000-02-25 04:28 PM


Wonderful writing Sven from a heart in love.  I hope for the best for you.  James
Isis
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5 posted 2000-02-25 05:23 PM


It'll work out hon, have hope.  Beautiful poem as always, a longing soul, nothing nicer   *HUGS*

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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