Dark Poetry #1 |
Nothing Will Be The Same |
moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
Nothing will be the same I know that now. It will be hard, I guess But I have to go on somehow. The days seemed happier When you were still alive. The laughter, more heartfelt. Funny, it is how a drab world could have color because of thee how a boring day could ever possess meaning, if not immortality. The nights will seem colder, even lonelier, I know. The day might be difficult, even empty. But things don't look bleak anymore As much as it used to be. I'm no longer just a speck of mankind But also of humanity. [This message has been edited by moshpit (edited 02-25-2000).] |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
A wonderful piece here, mosh. I have known a few influences like this. A wonderful gift they give. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
mosh, this is emotionally excellent...and perfect! I love the ending lines. very nice work take care,janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Wonderful emotional work, touching on you and the bigger picture. Well done May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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blueyz75 Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 138IL |
Describes the view of the world I saw after a friend of mine committed suicide. Along with all the anger and rage there was that. Kelly I love the male body, it's better designed than the male mind.---Andrea Newman |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Wow!! In a few words you have expressed very well the pain that results from loss and the wonderful human ability to go on, even when we at first don't believe we can. The people in our lives supply the color to our world. A beautiful poem!!! |
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