Dark Poetry #1 |
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the meaning of the clouds |
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cope New Member
since 2000-02-23
Posts 4 |
the clouds that hover over head dark and dreary but yet being a simbol meaning endless sinds for the few that look and yet being incomplet without a raindrop the flash of lightning or the sound of thunder but having a meaningless life for one being unreconizable to them selves and yet the clouds will still have pations and will wate for those that haven't seen there light of sparks that will give them there meaning in life and set them on a cours with time that will fallow forever so the next time you see the clouds look for the posbilites in the rain for your time in the light and for the wispers of your loved once in the sounds |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WOW..cope i love this...its sentiment is excellent... "for your time in the light and for the wispers of your loved once in the sounds"... so beautiful!!! great job janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
This is beautiful, anything can be what WE make it. Well done, but watch your spelling there are a few errors in this one. ![]() May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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blueyz75 Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 138IL |
Were the spelling mistakes intentional or accidental? Sometimes I use spelling in a poem to make a point. So thought I'd ask. Kelly I love the male body, it's better designed than the male mind.---Andrea Newman |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
"look for the posbilites in the rain" "for your time in the light" If we close our eyes to possibilities we will most certainly miss our time in the light. A beautiful poem!! |
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