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cope
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since 2000-02-23
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0 posted 2000-02-25 12:21 PM


the clouds that hover over head
dark and dreary but yet being a simbol
meaning endless sinds for the few that look
and yet being incomplet without a raindrop
the flash of lightning or the sound of thunder
but having a meaningless life
for one being unreconizable to them selves
and yet the clouds will still have pations
and will wate
for those that haven't seen there light of sparks
that will give them there meaning in life
and set them on a cours with time
that will fallow forever
so the next time you see the clouds
look for the posbilites in the rain
for your time in the light
and for the wispers of your loved once in the sounds


 

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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-25 04:17 PM


WOW..cope i love this...its sentiment is excellent...
"for your time in the light
and for the wispers of your loved once in the sounds"...
so beautiful!!!
great job
janet marie




 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-02-25 06:19 PM


This is beautiful, anything can be what WE make it.  Well done, but watch your spelling there are a few errors in this one.  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



blueyz75
Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 138
IL
3 posted 2000-02-26 07:37 PM


Were the spelling mistakes intentional or accidental?  Sometimes I use spelling in a poem to make a point.  So thought I'd ask.

Kelly


 I love the male body, it's better designed than the male mind.---Andrea Newman


childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
4 posted 2000-02-26 07:54 PM


"look for the posbilites in the rain"
"for your time in the light"
If we close our eyes to possibilities we will most certainly miss our time in the light. A beautiful poem!!

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