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cope
New Member

since 2000-02-23

Posts 4

0 posted 2000-02-23 11:53 PM

the night is moust
the night is damp
the moon is the only light
that flows through the camp
I stand there
with my head low
and then the demons music
starts to flow
I search throw the fog
and the misty night
and there they dance
throw the light
its my love
she's danceing
with the devil
in the pale moon light
I can not move
I can not blink
and yet they still dance
not missing a beat
they gracefully glide
throw the fog
and the mist
there legs not moving
but what
hear comes the kiss
which unights
the goodness that she posest
into the dark and evil cretin
her soul and hart
are lost to me
for ever.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 2000-02-24 12:28 PM

Welcome to Passions and the dark forum Cope!

This was beautiful and sad, well done, awaiting more

May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

2 posted 2000-02-24 01:00 PM

Dark & sad. I enjoyed this piece & look forward to reading more of your work.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-02-24 07:28 PM

Hi, welcome to passions...this one is perfect for DP...I really like the felling of this poem...mystic and errie at the same time...very well written and expressed!
take care janet marie

...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

4 posted 2000-02-25 10:27 AM

"Do you dance with the devil in the pale moonlight?"

The world of the dark is here to embrace, take my hand my friend while i lead you a merry chase.

Greetings
Walter

Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

5 posted 2000-02-25 01:40 PM

i too enjoyed reading this piece. dark and eerie indeed. i could picture the whole scene in my mind. wonderful!
the only thing that i would say needs a little work is some of your spelling. no offense intended. i just kind of got held up in reading it 'cuz i had to stop and figure out what a couple of words were. Otherwise the piece was very well done.

ill_tactics
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 149

6 posted 2000-02-25 06:07 PM

hmmm, good piece. Nice work for your first entry. Welcome to the darkest of passions. I hope you have more, because I am ready to read. Once again, that was great. Much love, One love, PEACE

blueyz75
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 138
IL

7 posted 2000-02-26 07:30 PM

Hola, I think that is how you spell it, it means hello in spanish! I like the vision you paint of a women dancing with the devil in the moonlight.

Kelly

I love the male body, it's better designed than the male mind.---Andrea Newman

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