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The Jackal
Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-02-24 12:18 PM


the obscene revulsion
the same twisted thing again
if it was free..it still couldnt end
confined in me
my new found superficial enemy
starts pumping those juices again
look at whats pretty..
lets examine what we call fair
treat you with whats left of me
but still find the change of heart
leads to an absolute nowhere.....

© Copyright 2000 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-02-24 12:47 PM


Such bitterness portrayed here, it always comes down to this, who is right, who is wrong.   Well expressed and written though  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
2 posted 2000-02-24 01:49 AM


Trying to figure if the transplant is real or figurative. Either way, I liked it a lot. espaecilly "my new found superficial enemy
starts pumping those juices again." Excellent work.
Jannel


 "I'm just saying
that we've mistaken one
for thousands of words,
and for that mistake
I've caused you such pain
that I damn that word."
-10000 Maniacs "Jezebel"



Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 2000-02-25 07:46 AM


Amen is all I can say....Awesome work.


Michael

blueyz75
Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 138
IL
4 posted 2000-02-26 07:20 PM


Reminds me somewhat of a caged animal.  Not sure why!

Kelly


 I love the male body, it's better designed than the male mind.---Andrea Newman


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