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another absolute nowhere..... |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
the obscene revulsion the same twisted thing again if it was free..it still couldnt end confined in me my new found superficial enemy starts pumping those juices again look at whats pretty.. lets examine what we call fair treat you with whats left of me but still find the change of heart leads to an absolute nowhere..... |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Such bitterness portrayed here, it always comes down to this, who is right, who is wrong. Well expressed and written though  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
Trying to figure if the transplant is real or figurative. Either way, I liked it a lot. espaecilly "my new found superficial enemy starts pumping those juices again." Excellent work. Jannel "I'm just saying that we've mistaken one for thousands of words, and for that mistake I've caused you such pain that I damn that word." -10000 Maniacs "Jezebel" |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Amen is all I can say....Awesome work. Michael |
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blueyz75 Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 138IL |
Reminds me somewhat of a caged animal. Not sure why! Kelly I love the male body, it's better designed than the male mind.---Andrea Newman |
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