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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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All alone with my pain staring out the window seeing only rain Nothing left of my soul not an ounce of life between my shoulders I've found your knife The foolish one I thought you so nice you stabbed me not once but twice How blind I must be I actually thought you loved me -SEA- *this was something a friend of mine was going through,I wrote this after she told me her pain. |
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Björn Junior Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 23Münster, Germany |
SEA: That puts into words what I feel right now. I´d like to say: well done! Sometimes it´s really hard to see that words can also build up to something nice and optimistic  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
great poem SEA..perfect rhyme... inspiration from a friends pain...did you show them this? very nice work. take care, janet marie ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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mystery Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 79 |
This poem is so inspirational for all of us, sometimes we play the fool for love and there is nothing wrong with that. It does become a problem when you are the fool all of the time, I hope that your friend has gotten over the relationship, tell her to move on for me!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sea this is excellent. It so perfectly describes how foolish we are sometimes and how we are deceived by our feelings of love. James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sea this was wonderful, perfect descriptions of the feelings of rejection etc we all feel when love goes wrong.  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I certainly can relate. It's a hard slap in the face when you realize just how foolish you can be sometimes. Glad it wasn't written for you, though. Michael |
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