Dark Poetry #1 |
Lost Souls |
PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Because of my inaction A child has died I pray for her soul More than I pray for mine For I am undeserving But the mother I condemn; I condemn her to Hell There, may she forever dwell |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
JML from what I can gather, you are blaming yourself here? Please don't it is SO hard to know when to cross the line and intervene. The mother will get her just deserts via the law and eventually her own soul. May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
JML - how terribly sad your words are. I don't know the situation but do not blame yourself for inaction. How do we know when or when not to act? Take care friend. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
This was a true story. I hope everyone will take action when they know of a child in a bad home environment, instead of letting others do it, and staying un-involved. I know i was not to blame really, but i wrote this while the emotions were still fresh. I will always feel some complicity. Thanks for reading this one. |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
terribly sad. works very well with the title. jannel |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
terribly sad. works very well with the title. jannel "I'm just saying that we've mistaken one for thousands of words, and for that mistake I've caused you such pain that I damn that word." -10000 Maniacs "Jezebel" |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This is a horrible place to be, but Isis is right, you can't blame yourself. My heart to you. michael |
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