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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
My journey has been hard and my search endless That of which I seek proves to be dauntless It flanks my efforts pushing me down Disoriented I turn to react yet it is gone Though I cannot see it I choose to pursue I feel it’s presence taunting my every breath I feel it’s laughter harassing my very soul This realm of chaos has driven many astray Punishing what I have vowed to protect Helping that of what I stand against Yet here I still travel, humbled and broken And although it may prove fruitless I continue Every day pushing on and seeking that, That which proves to be dauntless 'Cause if the face inside can't see the light I know I'll have to walk alone And if I walk alone to the other side I know I might not make it home (creed) |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
This is wonderful baerlon...I love it! I really relate to this...so very much. I've never been able to describe it though. Well done.  "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
bae..this is excellent.. "I feel it’s presence taunting my every breath I feel it’s laughter harassing my very soul This realm of chaos has driven many astray Punishing what I have vowed to protect Helping that of what I stand against"... I love this verse... like D.E. just said...you have well expressed these feelings we all have, but most cant put in to words...poetic ones at that..great job, as always take care, janet marie Now for me some words come easy... But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch. You never knew what I loved in you-- I don't know what you loved in me... Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be... How long have I been sleeping- How long have I been drifting alone through the night... How long have I've dreaming I could make it right... If I closed my eyes and tried with all my might To be the one you need... Jackson Browne |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Thank you both, it really means alot that others understand yet in a way i wish others did not. I know what this feeling is like and would never wish it on others There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed |
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