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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
Okay guys, this is off the top of my head...here goes! why can't I love you? why can't I be with you? why do they say that you are wrong? why do they say that they are right? why did you leave? why did I let you leave? why do you have to be the one for me? why do you make it so difficult? why is there a barrier between us? why is the invisible wall there? why ask why? why not just let yourself free, and be uninhibited? these are the questions that really matter... ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ *She loves, she's Love, and yet she is not lov'd* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
why ask why??..because as you say...these are the questions that really matter... great job...good declaration of feelings. take care, janet marie Now for me some words come easy... But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch. You never knew what I loved in you-- I don't know what you loved in me... Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be... How long have I been sleeping- How long have I been drifting alone through the night... How long have I've dreaming I could make it right... If I closed my eyes and tried with all my might To be the one you need... Jackson Browne |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You know what Venus when I read a poem that the writer states is just off the top of their head or they threw it together in just a few minutes after they stepped out of the shower, and so forth (laugh), I usually find that the poem reflects this precisely. However, in this particular situation I find this to be excellent. How do you do that? I have to work with my writing..but I love working with my thoughts as I try to figure out how to put down on paper the thoughts I am thinking in my mind. James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Why does the sun shine? That's about as easy to answer too! Well done Venus, for a quicky job this is excellent.. May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Why does the sun shine? That's about as easy to answer too! Well done Venus, for a quicky job this is excellent.. May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
I ask myself a lot of these questions myself. Very well written! "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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