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ChainedAngel
Member
since 2000-01-07
Posts 55
tx

0 posted 2000-02-21 12:53 PM


MY BIG COMEBACK POEM!! Muahahahaa!!

Stare past the shadows with me, my friends.
Hold my hand tightly, loved one.
Grasp this moment, before it ends.
Our life together has begun.

Exchange of promises to one another.
Sealed with a sweet kiss.
There's no one above her.
I've dreamed of the day I'd live like this.

I can't help but watch her sleep at night,
Her body next to mine,
Rub my fingers through her hair,
Her beautiful lips, even in darkness, shine.

We watch the sun every morning, every night.
Like a miracle each day I tell her.
Every morning such a sight.
The sun replinishing our souls forever.

If only you could have seen her,
Oh, if you could have touched her hands,
We'll always be together,
No matter how many miles or different lands.

It's a little bit of puppy love,
A kiss on the lips every minute or two,
MY sweet angel, my dove,
My ChainedAngel has broke through.

Tasin Ray

(I'm baaaccckkk.  )



 There is a dream inside a dream. I'm wide awake the more I sleep. You'll understand when I'm dead

- B. Warner

© Copyright 2000 Tasin Ray - All Rights Reserved
danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
1 posted 2000-02-21 01:09 AM


Well, it is wonderful to see you back! Did you really go get married? If so then a congratulations is in order. May you both have a lifetime of happiness. This poem was a beautiful comeback. She is a lucky lady as I'm sure you are lucky man. Love can be a wonderful thing. Anyway, glad your back, see ya 'round.  
Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
2 posted 2000-02-21 01:28 PM


To find love is as good as it gets.  Protect and nuture it for it will bring so many joys to you.
Welcome back, continue writing!
Danny

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-02-21 01:59 PM


wow this is beautiful..a REAL TRUE love poem...excellent...and glad to have you back with us...more more more...smile..
take care, janet marie

 Now for me some words come easy...
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch.
You never knew what I loved in you--
I don't know what you loved in me...
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be...
How long have I been sleeping-
How long have I been drifting alone through the night...
How long have I've dreaming I could make it right...
If I closed my eyes and tried with all my might
To be the one you need...
Jackson Browne



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-02-21 10:31 PM


Tasin Congrats and welcome back.  We missed you, I missed you.  What a wonderful poem, filled with the magic of love.  My wish for you is you and your new wife continue to feel what you feel now for each other, for the rest of your lives.  I'm so happy for you hon.  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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