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(((Mirror Image))) |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
Silence instills the earth time is moving simultaneous with the rivers, The sound of leaves talking fills the air as the wind brushes against my cheek, ...Peacefully time sits still Golden beams of warm giving light hits my skin pure white clouds, creep like a mouse across the bright blue sky, Peaceful this picture may seem but this is merely a dreadful dream, In reality the sky is dark and dreadful with clouds of anger and spite, The wind whistles and howls as demons of the darkness prowel the night, The leaves cry as branches break and fall slowly to the ground, Coldness hits my skin like needles sending a shiver down my spine, ...Unfortunately time sat still Through my eyes I see a world peacefully sitting still but inside a world of darkness and cold, bringing that painful chill, Two sides of a mirror just like Alice in Wonderland, one side a world so simple on the other a world not so typical, Mirror images like good and evil life and death its hard to decipher so I hold my last breath, Breaking that mirror is the only way out "7 years of bad luck" I heard someone shout, Bad luck is what that mirror has been as my mouth gave an evil grin, Holding the mirror in my hand ready to strike I think to myself "thats my life", So easy to just take it away with the swift movement of a hand but that wasn't God's plan, Once again I'm back to a mirror imaged life at times it may look hard other times it may seem easy, And as I peer deep inside I will be ready for that fight. |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
a great piece. another one with which i can relate. it is true. you can only take the good with the bad and learn from it all. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I>T. this is excellent, your covered SO many emotions and images here...the dream sequences and the mirror images...very good, and the last thoughts of inner strength are the perfect ending. great job!! "Bring it on baby what you getting into... I swear at once it was the little things that mattered-- But it all seems true to you. Say the hell with my name and say the hell with my picture... but swear, for the one time you need me around. And here I'll stand like it matters... Only once love gets through then gets scattered by the rain... But pain gives me the right to be unkind"... Tabitha's Secret |
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