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Wings with tattered strings |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392
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There will be no angels to spread their wings to carry me to heaven for I have dwelled in my darkness far too long. There will be no angels to sing a sweet, heavenly song for I will never grace guilded gates upon my dieing. There are some, such as I whos wings are held on with nothing more than tattered strings that bow upon blackened knees to cry. There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
Wow. Such a beautiful image. "There are some, such as I whos wings are held on with nothing more than tattered strings that bow upon blackened knees to cry." This is a beautiful image. I am greatly impressed. jannel "I'm just saying that we've mistaken one for thousands of words, and for that mistake I've caused you such pain that I damn that word." -10000 Maniacs "Jezebel" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Lovely imagery here, but hey only mass murderers, rapists etc. don't go to heaven, if you do unto others as you want them to do unto you, I believe you will find your rewards. Don't look ahead, focus on each day at a time and make it a masterpiece!! The rewards WILL follow... (HUGS) and well done  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautifully sweet sad poem Alibaster... as said above, lovely imagery... and even torn and tattered...an angels wings still fly...(smile) take care, janet marie "Bring it on baby what you getting into... I swear at once it was the little things that mattered-- But it all seems true to you. Say the hell with my name and say the hell with my picture... but swear, for the one time you need me around. And here I'll stand like it matters... Only once love gets through then gets scattered by the rain... But pain gives me the right to be unkind"... Tabitha's Secret |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
i sometimes wonder if there is a way out of this darkness we dwell in. tattered strings may be all thats holding your wings on but they are still there and only by healing will they ever serve their purpose. just a thought. strong words, stronger meaning. sincerely, aimee |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
i am in complete agreement with devin. what is tattered can be re-sewn. sadly beautiful image. |
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