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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
when the world seems to crumble at fingertips eager to make it better when the seas that you wish to part trap you in their violent dance to the winds when those winds pull you farther and farther from the idea of peaceful summers when thoughts of the sun are darkened by clouds full of trouble and pain when your eyes cant focus on the future cause all you can see is pouring rain when you think you still have time yet everytime you look that chance has passed when you peer out from behind a tear to see if anyone is there, and the room seems empty when the walls come tumbling down i will always be around Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is GREAT...smooth flowing rhyme pattern and a lovely dedication of emotion...very nice to read!!take care, janet marie "...we were born before the wind...also younger than the sun... and my heart you have won...as we sailed into the mystic... I just want to rock your gypsy soul- just like in the days of old... and together we will float-into the mystic... Van Morrison |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
Beautiful, nice thought of a friend being there when the world around them is full of tears and constant thunderstorms of emotions. Youre the sunshine peering through the clouds, good job. Much love, One love, PEACE |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
There may be no better definition of loyalty and love than what you wrote. Very well said and what a lucky person to have you there! Danny |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
Beautiful. The sense of devotion is wonderful. Jannel |
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