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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA 
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I live my life In pain And sorrow It hurts to go on Day by day I write of sadness Saying I live life For the people around me Well the people are gone Hope is lost I have lost all I had I leave my life Right here right now Without a sound Without a trace To never be found -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Neala hon are you ok? This could be seen as a goodbye note. I hope it is not? I hope it was just a sad folorn poem. Please email me and let me know you are indeed ok? Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
If you find that the only thing you can write is sad poetry, then I say go for it. It fits with your nickname quite well..... and the poem was beautiful in a sad way. You wrote: Without a sound Without a trace To never be found Great job of rhyming and writing your thoughts down. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Neala... you do leave a sound...you do leave a trace...your beautiful poetry...never give up on hope or your gift...most of all on your self...you wont always feel this way... trust me...others know, and others care, and everyone can learn from your experiences and from your poetry. take care, janet marie "...we were born before the wind...also younger than the sun... and my heart you have won...as we sailed into the mystic... I just want to rock your gypsy soul- just like in the days of old... and together we will float-into the mystic... Van Morrison |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
what i took from your poem wasnt really the end of life, but the end of a period in life. made me think about the end of my marriage, i think it could be the end of my life, but i will move on and i will start a new one, and truthfully i dont want the two to have anything to do with each other. thank you for making me think. i hope i took from it what you meant me to. |
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