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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA 
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Standing in front of thee Wishing thee could be 'o' so close I am merely a misguided love Trying to find answers To questions of lost hope Realizing I am falling for thee Hoping this passion is false So then thee's life is understood And simply plain But that mere hope is false Thee's life could never be simple As long as love for thee is true You confuse thee And make thee live by Thee moment -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
superb poem Neala...like a scene from Romeo and Juliet...perfect for Valentines day!! take thee care(smile) janet marie In the time we've known That we each are a part of one another We've lost as much as we have won... And as our lives have grown We have found that it only brings us pain To hang on to the things that we have done... ***Still I love the times you've come*** Jackson Browne |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
I don't understand how it could be out of Romeo and Juliet but I like it! "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Thee's life could never be simple As long as love for thee is true Beautiful and simple lines. Nice piece  Jennifer |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
its very frustrating when a love you have for someone is only complicating your life as well as theirs. and even worse when its a true love, the love only soul mates share. well said!! Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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