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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-02-13 10:22 PM


Your hand reaches across space and time,
To comfort me,
Your words of rhyme, beauty sublime,
They speak to me.

A gentle touch, a loving caress,
I look into your eyes,
A gentle smile, words unspoken,
You alone can calm my cries.

A soul bathed in beauty,
In touch with yourself and beyond,
As I go under again,
It is for your love that I long.

But all my hopes are fallacy,
All dreams not a reality,
Inner peace where can it be?
Is there no way out of this for me?

If I could have but one wish,
One wish to come true for me,
When my time to leave this world has come,
Yours would be the last loving face I see.


 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



© Copyright 2000 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-13 11:52 PM


oooh Isis, this is a beauty...I think there is one lucky soulmate out there somewhere tonite..(smile)
lovely thoughts...as always.
janet marie

 In the time we've known
That we each are a part of one another
We've lost as much as we have won...
And as our lives have grown
We have found that it only brings us pain
To hang on to the things that we have done...
***Still I love the times you've come***

Jackson Browne



Christopher
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since 1999-08-02
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Purgatorial Incarceration
2 posted 2000-02-14 12:31 PM


A wish is never simple my friend, niether is you poetry... well done again!

 -*Hope the dream.
---*Wish the future.
------*Live the now.



JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-02-14 08:16 AM


Your wish is so beautiful Isis.   Don't leave us angel.  What a precious thought and I hope and pray a fulfilled desire for you.   James
JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
4 posted 2000-02-14 08:38 AM


If I could have but one wish,
One wish to come true for me,
When my time to leave this world has come,
Yours would be the last loving face I see.



A simple lovely wish Lisa  

Jennifer

Sven
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East Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2000-02-14 12:50 PM


Isis. . .
         there just are no words to tell you how I feel. . . only that your words have touched my heart today, when I needed it. . .

Inner Peace is in your heart my friend. . . you will find it one day. . . you will find the way out. . .

Thank you. . .

---------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 2000-02-15 01:09 AM


Thanks everyone, glad you liked this so much.
I am not great with love poems, don't know why, but I never feel confident with them.

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Jesse Jaymz
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since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
7 posted 2000-02-15 09:54 AM


isis,
*hugs*  great poem.  we all have that simple wish.  but alas no matter how simple a wish may be, attaining it is the hardest thing.  and the way my life has been going the only thing that i will look at when i die is my guitar.     i hope that i can find a true love and finaly be happy but it looks like it will never find that.  it will be just me and my guitar wandering down the road like always.   *sigh*   great poem my friend.  *hugs*


 Then it comes to be that the soothing light at the end of your tunnel is just a frieght train coming your way...
MetallicA

Sven
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8 posted 2000-02-15 01:06 PM


Isis. . .Perhaps my friend. . . you need to reacquaint yourself with love. . .

Jesse. . . there is always hope. . . she is out there. . . you can never give up. . . I almost did. . . and right before that. . . I found her. . .

---------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
9 posted 2000-02-15 05:40 PM


Jesse she is out there hon.  I was wondering... what face will I look at as I did?  Will it be the face of love?  Etc.
That is what we all hope for.  (HUGS)

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Artur Hawkwing
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since 1999-06-30
Posts 444
USA
10 posted 2000-02-15 08:27 PM


Hi Isis,

I found this to be nice to read, because it speaks strongly of finding
the friend that is always there for you.  When I read this and
observed further, it made sense that when someone writes a piece
like this, it is usually because they know they will have times when
they must confront reality alone.  Am I right??

[This message has been edited by Artur Hawkwing (edited 02-15-2000).]

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
11 posted 2000-02-15 11:52 PM


Exactly Artur!!!  
I don't want to face death alone either that is for sure!!  You got it!!  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



ill_tactics
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 149

12 posted 2000-02-16 11:39 AM


That was a nice poem, really touched me.  One can never live life alone. Much love, One love, Peace....
JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
13 posted 2000-02-16 11:48 AM


If I could have but one wish,
One wish to come true for me,
When my time to leave this world has come,
Yours would be the last loving face I see.


Simple Wishes always come true  
Liked this very very much !


Jennifer

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