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Sven
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0 posted 2000-02-14 01:24 PM


The flame burns
Reminding me of that night
The night our bodies finally came together
To know that one true delight

The flame burns
Reminding me of that day
The day I left, but in my heart
I really wanted to stay

The flame burns
Remiding me of your face
With hair of gold and eyes of blue
And a smile that makes my heart race

The flame burns
Burns my heart and my soul
For you are there and I am here
And the tears I cannot control

The flame burns
Burns deep inside of me
You make all of my dreams come true
You are the one who sets my soul free

The flame burns
Burns like a thousand suns
It will never be quenched until that day
The day that you and I are again one

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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faith
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1 posted 2000-02-14 02:06 PM


Wow that was like soooo beautiful! ))))i loved it !i want more! faith
Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-02-14 03:41 PM


beautiful Sven...a perfect poem for Valentines Day...full of passion,desire and
romance!!! great job!
janet marie

 In the time we've known
That we each are a part of one another
We've lost as much as we have won...
And as our lives have grown
We have found that it only brings us pain
To hang on to the things that we have done...
***Still I love the times you've come***

Jackson Browne



Isis
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3 posted 2000-02-15 01:06 AM


Your heart sings it's Melody Sven.  So sorry you cannot be together now, I hope it will be soon.  (HUGS)

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Sven
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4 posted 2000-02-15 01:03 PM


Thank you all. . .

Faith. . .there is more where this came from

Janet Marie. . thank you, passion, desire, and romance are all my friends. . .

Isis. . . I know in my heart that it will be soon. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


JennyLee
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Northwestern, NJ.
5 posted 2000-02-15 04:43 PM


As always Sven, the longing of your soul is evident in your work. This was touching and beautiful.


Jennifer

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