Dark Poetry #1 |
The Flame |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
The flame burns Reminding me of that night The night our bodies finally came together To know that one true delight The flame burns Reminding me of that day The day I left, but in my heart I really wanted to stay The flame burns Remiding me of your face With hair of gold and eyes of blue And a smile that makes my heart race The flame burns Burns my heart and my soul For you are there and I am here And the tears I cannot control The flame burns Burns deep inside of me You make all of my dreams come true You are the one who sets my soul free The flame burns Burns like a thousand suns It will never be quenched until that day The day that you and I are again one ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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faith Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 89 |
Wow that was like soooo beautiful! ))))i loved it !i want more! faith |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful Sven...a perfect poem for Valentines Day...full of passion,desire and romance!!! great job! janet marie In the time we've known That we each are a part of one another We've lost as much as we have won... And as our lives have grown We have found that it only brings us pain To hang on to the things that we have done... ***Still I love the times you've come*** Jackson Browne |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Your heart sings it's Melody Sven. So sorry you cannot be together now, I hope it will be soon. (HUGS) Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . Faith. . .there is more where this came from Janet Marie. . thank you, passion, desire, and romance are all my friends. . . Isis. . . I know in my heart that it will be soon. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
As always Sven, the longing of your soul is evident in your work. This was touching and beautiful. Jennifer |
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