She wanted to know.....inspired by someone!

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Dark Poetry #1

She wanted to know.....inspired by someone!

faith
Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 89

0 posted 2000-02-14 01:04 PM

She wanted to know what love was so bad,
He was out to hurt ,but she took his hand,
And so a story was written , sad yet  true,
Now she is gone, she left no clue ,

When he asked her for love one angry night,
It will be like no other he said , well touch  new heights,
She gave him her smile,and  let herself be held ,
He marveled at his powers , this hate that he  felt,

He shoved her up against a wall , and poured in evil of his,
Making her whimper and plead , poisoning her newfound bliss,
What was left later is too gruesome to be told,
As he stood back and watched death unfold,

She lied in a corner and her dreams Un -dreamt,
God was remorseful for the devil he had sent,
Her body so dark , a truth no one could claim,
As the wind sadly ate that dying flame!sf

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-14 03:44 PM

deeply disturbing subject..but very well written and visualized poem.
graphic imagery. good job.
janet marie

In the time we've known
That we each are a part of one another
We've lost as much as we have won...
And as our lives have grown
We have found that it only brings us pain
To hang on to the things that we have done...
***Still I love the times you've come***

Jackson Browne

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

2 posted 2000-02-15 12:53 PM

deeply dark indeed. i am so sorry that this is inspired by a person that you know. a scary vision, a haunting piece.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2000-02-15 01:11 PM

Wow faith. . . this is dark and disturbing. . . it's like this sometimes though. . .we just want to be loved, to know love. . . but sometimes, we know not love. .. only hate

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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