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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 2000-02-15 11:28 AM



I AM ABOUT ON OPEN SEAS
RIDEING THE CHARGER
OF THE HEROES OF OLD
I CARRY MY GOLDEN SHIELD
WITH ARMOUR BRIGHT AND  NEW
THE GOLDEN DRAGONS ON MY CHEST
IN JEWELLED HILT A SWORD RESTS
HERE I STAND TALL PROUD
FEARSUM UNNASSAILABLE
IN A WORLD SORE DISABLED
SEE ME FLOAT ON MAJESTY
SEE ME MEET YOUR EYES
ALLOW MY SENTIMENT
NOT TO MOCK
SWEET LADY I AM THINE

 Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd


© Copyright 2000 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-15 04:16 PM


ahhh...divine...majestic...perfect!!


 "...we were born before the wind...also younger than the sun...
and my heart you have won...as we sailed into the mystic...
I just want to rock your gypsy soul-
just like in the days of old...
and together we will float-into the mystic...
Van Morrison


JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 2000-02-15 04:36 PM


Nice Walter. The all caps messed with my eyes though!

Jennifer

Artur Hawkwing
Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444
USA
3 posted 2000-02-15 07:40 PM


You must be another mythology-lover.  Your thoughts parallel with
Lancelot's in this... I loved this piece for its "awe-filling"
visualization.

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