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Serpent's Kiss |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. 
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I wrote this some years ago but thought it a fitting piece to use to introduce myself. As you can see I tend towards brevity and visual imagery. This piece really doesn't mean anything it's just an interesting image. -Serpent's Kiss- Beneath the bricks of a silent street A serpent there lies sleeping While up above in the silent night A princess there stands weeping And at her feet Her tears create a flood Around a prince With venom in his blood [This message has been edited by Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith (edited 02-12-2000).] |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Nice short piece. Would like to see more of your writing. Welcome to this Forum! Danny |
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~Red~ Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 36chicago, Ill-na, u.s.a. |
Hey i really liked this....its quite interesting....nice work..hope to see more! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very nice imagery...WELCOME to Passions!!! take care, janet marie ...found your heart-then lost your lover...licked your wounds then run for cover... take your time...there will be another... and dont make the same mistake twice... unless you can pay the price... Dan Fogelberg |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Wow...this piece is intense. A princess there stands weeping And at her feet Her tears create a flood Around a prince With venom in his blood This describes a few people I know! Well Done. |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
i like it's imagery. short is a wonderful thing! but just out of curiosity...why did you write it (what inspired it) if it has no meaning as you say? |
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