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Begging you please
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Begging you please |
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~Red~ Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 36chicago, Ill-na, u.s.a. |
He lies silent Before my very eyes I watch him Watching me Those eyes of his So pure n true Taking me in Me into his dreams Here we lie, Hand in hand On a fobidden isle And he catches me As i fall Into his dreams dreams so mysterious So pleasent yet so blue For these demons Demons of the jealous Are ripping me away Away from you Here now....lying in this dream Torn away from you Wanting to wake I miss you love Pull me in Into your dreams I want to be in your arms Tonite...... Dream me back to you Please, i beg of thee My love for you Is more than you'd beleive And to be kept from you Rips at my heart Dream me back to you To your dreams so calm n true Where we shall be Eternally set free Together....indeed as one. ~Why is it that you beleive in perfection my friend? For perfection is a dream, it shall never be acheived. So tell me why you beleive in perfection?....For PErfection doesn't exist..~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Red, this IS EXCELLENT!!!!!!! very well written and expressed. I like the dream imagery...very good work. take care, janet marie ...found your heart-then lost your lover...licked your wounds then run for cover... take your time...there will be another... and dont make the same mistake twice... unless you can pay the price... Dan Fogelberg |
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~Red~ Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 36chicago, Ill-na, u.s.a. |
gee thanx Janet for ur reply! yay! somebody likes my poem.....hehe |
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