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Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-02-11 06:49 PM


You tell me
We have a lasting friendship
Never to be broken
But shall it cross over
Into the deepths of love
Cause I mean so much
As a friend
You don't wanna loose that
So we can go no farther
Than friends

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-11 09:15 PM


hey...Neala is back..(smile)...I was wondering about you...i didnt think I had seen a post in awhile...this is very good...I had a friendship just like this..sometimes the feelings turn into more...its a confusing time.
take care, janet marie

 ...found your heart-then lost your lover...licked your wounds then run for cover...
take your time...there will be another...
and dont make the same mistake twice...
unless you can pay the price...
Dan Fogelberg



TanAngel
Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA
2 posted 2000-02-11 09:35 PM


I think we have all felt this. I hope not to have that happen again. This feeling is never a happy one...everything is always so depressing huh?

 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-02-12 12:46 PM


I've felt this too, it hurts but sometimes it's the only way.  Well written  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Devin
Junior Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 29
Oviedo,Fl, USA
4 posted 2000-02-12 07:43 AM


Neala--

Well, ya know I've felt this way. Sucks, doesn't it? Well, that's about it. Nice poem!


 Do not shed a tear for me. I am happy, so be happy also.

Never lose hope, for even the darkest nights have ends. ~Cloud ^_^



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