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~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128


0 posted 2000-02-10 07:34 PM


This title-less poem is dedicated to someone very close to me. Arigato, minna! Hope you enjoy!

I'm trusting her
Life
in your hands.

You have to care for her,
love her,
for I cannot do so
anymore.

Do not,
I repeat,
do not
break her heart,
for she has been
through so much heartbreak
and heartache already.

Don't leave her,
don't hurt her.
Just love her.


 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

*She loves, she's Love, and yet she is not lov'd*

© Copyright 2000 ~Venus~ - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-10 11:31 PM


Venus...this is a beautiful SWEET poem...what a lovely gift for this special person in your life...very very nice.
take care, janet marie

 ...found your heart-then lost your lover...licked your wounds then run for cover...
take your time...there will be another...
and dont make the same mistake twice...
unless you can pay the price...
Dan Fogelberg



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-02-11 01:11 AM


Sweet, caring and thoughtful.   Hope your wishes in this case come true.

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



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