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Dark Poetry #1

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Bojopy
Member

since 2000-01-03

Posts 391

0 posted 2000-02-09 10:05 PM

a quick one off the top of my head

Waited in wane
Waited insane
Feeling no freedom
But it's demon

Numbers have labored
But not neighbored
The wills have not won
And now my time is undone

Only one of so many
never to be with any
The love tables have turned
And are lost......are burned

Back in a beginning
And never willing
...............or forgiving
So traveled and so tried
Next to nothing
.................Died....< !signature-->

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)

[This message has been edited by Bojopy (edited 02-11-2000).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-10 12:20 PM

Bojo..you must be feeling quite inspired tonite... this is the second work of art I've seen by you this eve...just off the top of your head huh? impressive...(smile)
janet marie

...baby, dont you work so hard for this prize you found...
it will all be gone when you turn around...
cause ... nothin' lasts forever anyway...
Rick Roberts-Windmills

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

2 posted 2000-02-10 01:03 AM

Bo- wonderful to see you back! where ya been?
anyway, great piece and i can completely relate to the last two stanzas. see ya 'round.

Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear.
-Tool-

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 2000-02-11 01:03 AM

Bo, I like the ones' 'off the top of your head'
they always turn out fine!!!

Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)

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